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Open Poetry #33

Heartbreak Rain

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

0 posted 2004-10-18 01:59 AM

Rain reflecting off the Moon,
wash my heart free
of all feeling, all hope.
Soak me through
to the skin of my soul.
Clothe me in dampened dreams.
Let the stars be liquid
and melt into the darkness.
Take love and wash it away.
Hang all love thoughts
out to dry. Place a veil
across the Moon's Face,
as black and dark as
the void within my heart.

Rain pouring over the Moon,
cleanse me with tears of loss,
with drops of unwanted pain.
Drown me deeply
in the eddies of sadness.
Float my passion down
streams of abandonment,
to the rivers of jagged sobs.
Let the throb of each raindrop
pulse and patter upon the roof
of a house that covers over
unkept strands of endearments made,
the fragmented pieces of moonbeams.
Rivulets that merge with anguished seas.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2004-10-18 02:18 AM

"Let the throb of each raindrop
pulse and patter upon the roof"

~ so poetically expressive.

Ivy Rose, both you and your poetry have been missed by this reader ~ and fan. Tears welled in my eyes as I read your wistful and ever so sad mots of heartbreak.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2004-10-18 10:10 AM

IvyRose~
In this poignant penning ...

'Let the stars be liquid
and melt into the darkness.'

... I found a gem-thought, as I always do when I read you~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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