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DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
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0 posted 2004-10-17 11:57 AM


Just ideas on the hoof

Dave

Dapple grey left hand side
Cornering on my hide
Like's to take the corners sharp
Keep old Nic's teeth apart

Always a snapper right hand side
Slavers so much
It must be pride
Never bites cos no-ones near

Brakes on left hand side
We veer to our bruised hides
Pick up those who were above
Alas like fingers seeking a glove

Inn is there low narrow arch
Coachman has cleared and parched
Trunks upon the road are still
Coachboy blue is looking ill

Paid a bonus for inside
Bullies to beat sense into a hide
Now the bullie boys work again
The horses and always the men

Coachboy looking green these days
He knows life and will not stray
The company has him deep entrall
And so he keeps his neck so small

Newgate is a popular place
And you can visit without a trace
But cross a politican on the line
And you will be hanging just from twine


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Copperbell
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since 2003-11-08
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1 posted 2004-10-17 12:01 PM


smiling
Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2004-10-17 07:15 PM


painted pinto,
pure poetry,
seeks connection
with spirits past

hooves speak
loud and clear

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

3 posted 2004-10-18 08:57 AM


cleaver and well done....very very cool write, mister!  I liked
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