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Alicethruglass
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since 2001-06-19

Posts 368

0 posted 2004-10-13 09:03 AM

foolish thoughts

to release these shackles
that words have put upon me
and fashioned my fall in life

to rise up against and locate elsewhere
a search of need
to silence the tunes that once played
the other side of pain
every time you were near

I feel the cold of winter while putting up
the snow fences of my mind
leaving the challenges behind for others

I know deep inside what lies there,
those dreams, the real, the tranquility of a love
that fills and overflows, lingering
in the shadows of foolish thoughts...

~A~

*mirrored against my will*

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2004-10-13 09:17 AM

I feel the cold of winter while putting up
the snow fences of my mind
leaving the challenges behind for others

I know deep inside what lies there,
those dreams, the real, the tranquility of a love
that fills and overflows, lingering
in the shadows of foolish thoughts...

very well written, but oh so sad. Hugs.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

2 posted 2004-10-13 09:21 AM

Wonderful writing!!!!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2004-10-13 09:24 AM

tremendous weaving of words, very much enjoyed

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

4 posted 2004-10-13 04:17 PM

I know deep inside what lies there,
those dreams, the real, the tranquility of a love
that fills and overflows, lingering
in the shadows of foolish thoughts...

OMG! I WISH I HAD WRITTEN THIS.

Fantabulous!

Maree

into my library itgoes.

cuz fate is not just whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

~ani difranco~

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2004-10-13 04:21 PM

"I know deep inside what lies there,
those dreams, the real, the tranquility of a love
that fills and overflows, lingering
in the shadows of foolish thoughts..."

Wow!! Fantastic write..full of profound thoughts.
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

6 posted 2004-10-13 08:37 PM

After reading one of yours a month or so ago, I wanted to make sure to stop by more frequently. You have a way of making the reader feel blood rushing through the heart!
I enjoy your writing.
miscellanea

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

7 posted 2004-10-14 01:48 AM

I know deep inside what lies there,
those dreams, the real, the tranquility of a love
that fills and overflows, lingering
in the shadows of foolish thoughts...
**********************

Foolish???? Not at all. Time has it's own path around the sundial, we are only to wait for the casting of the shadow.
*********************

A very nice read with a smooth flow that captures the reader to the end. No loss or detour in this piece.

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

8 posted 2004-10-15 06:12 AM

"foolish thoughts"

these are the things that fuel our drive into the unknown.....to push us even when we feel we are making a mistake.....

foolish maybe, but may still lead to those greater things you long for....

you touched me with this, and i do enjoy reading you

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