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Over All the Rest
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Over All the Rest |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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Over All the Rest Often in the evening When grey shadows come I can see more clearly All the things I’ve done And when the darkness settles Softly on my breast I can see your image Over all the rest Sometimes in the morning When the sun appears I cansense this passion Growing through the years I can feel your fingers In a warm caress And I can hear you whisper Over all the rest Over all the lightning Through the blackest storm It was always you Who kept me safe and warm The distance never left me Very far behind For though the stormy winds I traveled back in time Sometimes in the winter Though the blinding snow I see all the words I wanted you to know But when the sunset settles Deeply in the west You will be the warmth I feel upon my breast And I will hold you dearly Over all the rest Elizabeth Santos |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
So beautiful..so perfect Liz! Another keeper for my library! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh, just beautiful Elizabeth. One to keep. Maree  cuz fate is not just whose cooking smells good |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
A deep devotion just as it should be. The flow in this was superb, not only line to line but verse to verse. I think we have all come to expect that from you anyway. You give us images with the passion and meaning behind them but never fail to keep the content in the forefront. Exceptional write. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, A whisper of warmth and beauty. |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
Your's is the beautiful poetry of an uncluttered heart! Rf |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Liz dear friend....your poetry is so beautiful, just like you!  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is incredibly beautiful... it leaves me thinking many things I can't even put into words... but you understand heart so well I don't think I need explain. *S* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I always enjoy you |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Your words never cease to fill my heart...as beautiful as the poetess from whos quill they come. I miss you too Liz, your a dear friend and a wonderful person. Ruth |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Elizabeth, it is so nice to read another one of your beautiful poems. |
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