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Robert Joseph
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since 2000-10-07

Posts 491
South Carolina

0 posted 2004-09-29 08:33 PM

Pale to Luster

Paint me again, Lily.
Petal frail strokes
upon off-white canvas.

Feathery lime wisps,
pale from their rising --
to luster
at full height.

Grant me "Babylon"
once again --
to compel all souls in peering.
Seated anew to be king of lost worlds.

Robert Joseph
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Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2004-09-29 08:46 PM

very interesting

I'm seeing a Manga-like image, dancing in a whispering hanging garden. LOL, maybe not what you intended.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

2 posted 2004-09-29 11:42 PM

wow...the color is showing...

~~*~~
Read between the lines
look deep into each word
and you will understand the
depth of my soul (GE)
~~**~~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-09-30 12:38 PM

neat write

Robert Joseph
Member

since 2000-10-07

Posts 491
South Carolina

4 posted 2004-09-30 05:34 AM

Midnitesun, at times I tend to write these little anthems to myself...you're not far from my motive. Thanks for reading.

Greeneyes, and Passing Shadows...thanks for taking a look.

Robert Joseph

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

5 posted 2004-09-30 05:49 PM

well, this is and isn't like you. you're not as wordy as you once were. but still as profound.

me

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2004-09-30 05:54 PM

Excellent write RJ..much enjoyed the read.
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Robert Joseph
Member

since 2000-10-07

Posts 491
South Carolina

7 posted 2004-09-30 06:17 PM

Snow, Enchantress, Many thanks for taking a look. Your time is greatly appreciated.

Robert Joseph

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

8 posted 2004-09-30 08:41 PM

An Outstanding Write.
Very much enjoyed.
TD

Robert Joseph
Member

since 2000-10-07

Posts 491
South Carolina

9 posted 2004-10-01 08:17 PM

Thanks so much, TD. I appreciate you taking time to reply.

Robert Joseph

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