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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Final surge With heroic money Voices meld into a single word Emotions Breaking waves Into ivory boardwalks Unimaginable scene Where simple, the mundane Working their lips over me I allow their way Unnoticed turns Unloosen warm breezes Rolling to spaces between Like a park entrance pulling on glasses Noticing the embroidered silk blouse Loosely hanging from The shoulder of earthen ruby melody Slender pitched whiteness Layered atop certain eyes Finding me Finding Pockets of heaven in you Your soul beating in me Tumbling down impulse Hanging square shoulders of The middle of night Where Arms bear secure Moaning curved thoughts To a sometimes sash of spring Luscious grand curiosity, with white-gloved fingers Where you and I stagger across Green lawns, holding each other Like something with little voices Of returned visions, Which once let go of our hands Sweetly Cresting waves of what seemed heavy But now…filling the mouth of flutes Knowing who the lamp was In the dark Remember Remember I whisper softly in your ear Your mouth smiles Turning familiarity, forest green Introducing core focus Unto the holiday of you The wild of you The red flower of morning Approaches We are an Oval Mirror |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You are a continuous flow of beauty, dear Lee. You never fail to convey some stunning images and emotions. Love, Margherita  |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
LeeJ Hope you dont mind a partial intepretation. Dave Propelled by interest We sought knowledge Empowered by prestige Deflated by presence Flattened by words Enticed by the pot of riches Drapped Hidden By a darkness Seeking to find each other In a democracy of hell And angels In arms searching, cutting, hurting Satisfying rebirth Doubting desire Dining on doubts And thoughts Of How we know it could be Which once let go of our hands Chesting should high seas Questing footing Toes gripping As the swell lifted Highter and higher In a dangerous sea Singing of a siren song Of capture And thee As lamps lit shining We swam Into the sea I whisper softly in your ear Your mouth smiles Turning familiarity, forest green Introducing core focus Unto the holiday of you The wild of you The red flower of morning Approaches We are an Oval Mirror Relected by our vision |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
DAMN! just beautiful. No, not just beautiful, but more than. Sigh. I'm keeping it. It's all mine mmmwwwahahahaah. Maree  Well I see you doing, What I try to do for me, With the words from a poet, And a voice from a choir, And a melody, nothing else matters. ~Stevie Nicks |
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