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Michelle_loves_Mike
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0 posted 2004-07-12 08:17 AM



"Hold me please..."
"You know I don't like to do that."
"Is it such an awful request?"
"Yes, it make me feel trapped."
"Sit with me then, hold my hand a while"
"You know I don't like my hand to get sweaty"
"You used to hold my hand, during movies at least"
"Was just to make you happy."
"Oh, o.k., guess my happiness means nothing"
"Well, of course it does, those things,,,just,,,"
"Fine, no problem, I'll keep my needs inside"
"I love you..."
"O.k.,,,,,,,I'm calling it a night."
"No goodnight kiss?"
"Nah......wouldn't want to invade your space."
"Now honey......"
"Goodnight."

To be held, is all I ask......

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1 posted 2004-07-12 10:45 AM


Hmmm. Not the most romantic night, heh?

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2 posted 2004-07-12 11:35 AM


I could tolerate it,,,,for one night,,,,I wish it were so
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3 posted 2004-07-12 12:32 PM


better than having one of those smothering types who never lets go
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4 posted 2004-07-12 12:34 PM


I can relate...  well done.
Kelly

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5 posted 2004-07-14 01:06 AM


No way,,,smother me, lol

Michelle

To be held, is all I ask......

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