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the_loner_23
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0 posted 2004-07-04 11:46 PM


I look up toward the sky
And see the sun reflecting
Of the water so blue

I look trough the clouds
That are so dark
And ominous
And it looks like I
Stare at two suns in the sky

The sun disappears
Beneath the trees
So green
And gives off
A green glow

The sky turns
Pink and orange
As the sun
Slowly disappears
Below the horizon

Cold hands means a warm heart

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Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2004-07-05 12:06 PM



You paint very picturesque pictures with your words!

Sweet dreams,
EA

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2004-07-05 01:50 AM


An enjoyable scene, thanks for sharing it!
iliana
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3 posted 2004-07-05 01:58 AM


I'd like to see this painting in real life; it would be very interesting.  Enjoyed.....jo
passing shadows
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4 posted 2004-07-05 03:10 AM


very pretty picture
Tequilia_Sunrise
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5 posted 2004-07-05 03:30 AM


enjoyed this very much, thankx
kaile
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6 posted 2004-07-05 10:58 AM


we should all take time out to stand and stare at the sky more often. thanks for reminding one of life's little pleasures..
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
7 posted 2004-07-05 11:00 AM


Very lovely Julie...
We should indeed take the time to enjoy the wonders of the universe more frequently.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

DawnG
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8 posted 2004-07-25 02:08 PM


I love looking at the paintings God grants us with daily. Reminds me of the beauty of the earth and also reminds me of loved ones passed on before me.

                          Dawn

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9 posted 2004-07-26 03:28 AM


very pretty
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