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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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Within You’ve brushed my senses With your whispered breath It’s soft warmth Flowing over my skin Bathing me in wishes for more I feel you in my dreams Wafting your presence Into my mind, my soul Tantalising me with images Of wanting your touch When I breathe in I feel you entering me A rush of warmth Rises up and fills my being And I surrender to its heat Each touch of thought Every breath of air Reverberates, echoes within Builds the intensity Until I’m alive with This burning passion Such sweetness flows I fizz with effervescence Some part of me changed Set apart, and yet I’m made complete In a magical melding of Utter wonder So brush against my soul Let me feel you here Where I want you Within Marsha Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds but I can face the future with courage brave and bold Footprints In My Heart Kethry |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Now that's some nice whispering, Marsha! So good to see your smiling face again, and read these yummy words.  |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Speaking in words of essence You speak volumes Really liked this Dave |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarshaLove~ You know that I love it~ And you~ Knowing you as I do ... I know that each thought contains a 'gram'  of the essence of your heart~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
whew! nice! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Marsha, very, very nice and passionate. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this one.  Hugs, Ethel |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Marsha, =================== So brush against my soul Let me feel you here Where I want you Within =================== Yup, that's pretty tender moving stuff. I like you touch the right places. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
very nice  |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
g'day bubbles, I see you're earning your nickname with this one. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yummm...like dark chocolate candy...James |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Marsha A smile spread across my face when I saw you here and I eagerly read your words. It's nice to see you haven't lost your wonderful touch when it comes to matters of the heart. Your words were like a breath of fresh air. I hope all is well in your life. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Soul painting, is how I often describe the spell of words we all share. Thanks for sharing your art work. Robert Joseph |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
I think this is the feeling of love, right?? It's so beautiful, it can feel your whole being..._,,,^.^,,,_ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marsha With words like that you could get trampled in the rush. Always a delight to read. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Pink may hurt my eyes, but some pains are worth bearing..... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Keep this going...James |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You weave such a beautiful, passionate spell, my friend... I've read this several times... so glad I could finally respond to it! *S* |
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