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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2004-09-22 11:11 AM



*~Taking Flight~*

I can't forget that moment
when it was as if the chains
finally broke
and the dark clouds
finally lifted
giving away
to the brightness       of day,

the answer
hidden in the dark skies
only needed to find
that ray of sunshine
to make it reach
further
than it ever had      before

likened to the light
dawning upon a new day
its message arose       so clear
and like a butterfly    taking flight
for the first time

a heart finally found its way~
to self forgiveness

{revised 9-22-04, reposted for a friend in need..}


The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

© Copyright 2004 dmsmith - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-09-22 11:16 AM


have to stop in and hug you tight!!!

you always a wonderful friend to all of us...

your friend is blessed ...and so am i..for knowing you

Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2004-09-22 11:20 AM


Dawn, it is good to see your smile here...
and I also, am blessed by you and the friends found on these pages of blue.
Heart hugs you precious lil...

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

Margherita
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3 posted 2004-09-22 11:24 AM


This is not only very beautiful, but also so profoundly wise.

Self-forgiveness is indeed a powerful means to a new freedom and lightness.

Flying ...

Love and Light.
Margherita

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4 posted 2004-09-22 11:35 AM


GentlestSpirit~
Understanding this one and *hugging* the gentleness of you for sharing it~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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5 posted 2004-09-22 06:59 PM


beautiful...like you
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6 posted 2004-09-22 07:17 PM


Lovely one

Yes - quality

dave

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7 posted 2004-09-23 07:24 AM


self forgiveness
the hardest person to forgive
been there  know this quite well
thanks for sharing

      


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