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Fall |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Soft the falling leaves a carpet of orange and gold entice tiny feet. Skip and dance and play glowing eyed, grinning pumpkins jack-o-lantern gleam. Apple cider kiss the wind makes scarecrows tremble cornstalks shaking leaves. Soft the falling leaves days shorten to winters bliss spring a memory. |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I like it. Dave |
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sim0riah Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 253Wyoming USA |
Mee too..Very nice sim0riah Only at night you can see the depth of the sun |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
so beautiful - I watched the leaves change from green to orange and yellow in about four days - I love this time of year |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Paula darling heart sister, you always write so beautifully, and this is simply exquisite. The imagery is so clear I can almost smell the bonfire, and hear the children playing in the fallen leaves. Truly outstanding writing darling one, I love this, utterly, utterly, utterly love it as always Mushy    Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
thank you We don't actually have a fall, here. We're just grateful for a breeze. I think I'll have to go see the leaves change, myself, to truly understand. Hugs lady. Enjoyed the stroll through your eyes. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well described! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Thanks |
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