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Open Poetry #33
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ecrivan
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my own state

0 posted 2004-09-18 01:51 PM


take at least one short poem a day
a glass of milk to wash it down
write what comes to your head
aware of sensitive ears around

write on topics from life to death
give them scope, give them breadth
with one in the morning, one miday
drowned in home brew, see walls give way...

ask for poem in pill form or liquid
a choice of a spill of words
or an encapsulated message
stuffed in tincture bottles
the iron glass washed ashore

followed up as doctor recommends
refills respects poetical trends
renewed perscription once then twice
back to the pharmacy for better advice..




[This message has been edited by ecrivan (09-18-2004 02:26 PM).]

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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2004-09-18 02:09 PM


ecrivan
A clever write, enjoyed the read.

ecrivan
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2 posted 2004-09-18 02:28 PM


adjusted the last stanza for rhyme..thanks Sy for sharing..


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