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ecrivan
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my own state

0 posted 2004-09-17 08:33 PM


It comes with the lease signed years ago
the space I live in called apartment
just another unavoidable circumstance
better than spread out on pine slabs
on a park bench after nightfall
the inevitable course of events
stick like the shadow I cast
why shall I fight it..

It comes with a faulty grade
thought higher level would be made
believe in myself just the same
trust in a person
with the same name.

It comes with social discourse
Might know how one would react
not all overtures elicit like responses
but if you know how a relative replies
it easier to reveal a relative disguise

comes when the end approaches
we'd like to start afresh
but like the lease that's signed
or the processed fruit storage date
there's an inevitable expiry
unavoidable circumstance
governed by destiny
morning to night
why fight it?...



[This message has been edited by ecrivan (09-17-2004 09:58 PM).]

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SouthernWinds
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Dreaming in the clouds
1 posted 2004-09-17 08:53 PM


This is very interesting, life does seem to have courses that we seem to be forced to follow.
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singapore
2 posted 2004-09-17 09:16 PM


kewl poem, Martin, about how we are programmed to follow certain societal trends

why fight it?...

hmm, to add more value to our lives? so as to respect the sanctity of life?

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