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Open Poetry #33

The Extreme Ways of Time

mrmojorisin5908
Member

since 2004-05-03

Posts 103
Colorado

0 posted 2004-09-15 07:45 PM

Shades of green waves
Looking away from me
Tides are sometimes shocking
With killing awakening
Time drags on, never ending
Time beginning once again
Walking away, it never stops
And we thought they were dangerous cops?
Walk away towards Mr. Mojo
Come, let’s go have some fun
What lake may it be?
Lizard or is it a snake
Come to the side you know
A legendary good ol’ fellow
Time to stop what you think you know
Stop, infinity, gone to the moon

Andrew A.
"While public funds evaporate in feasts of fraternity, a bell of rosy fire rings in the clouds."

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2004-09-16 09:25 AM

sounds a great deal like Jim Morrison's work...

Good write

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

2 posted 2004-09-16 11:43 AM

Lost it at times, came back and lost it again, came back and lost it again

The image is there and I can see it but then it seems to slip away.

Dave

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

3 posted 2004-09-16 11:51 AM

Ah yes, time is ever changing...a wonderful poem that expresses it well..

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