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vandana
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0 posted 2004-09-12 10:08 AM



Where do we stand here?
Where do we start from me?
Where do we start going?
Where do we go from here?
Early morning papers,
Reading news today
That now you have found someone new,
Now where do I stand?
From these empty spaces,
And wasted years we shared,
Here,
Same places,
Looking for the same
Having this love,
That I cared about
But it's seems It's not the sme,
Calling out your name,
Waking every morning
Seeing your sweet face,
But now,
I realise that's it's time for me,
To move on my life,
Where do we stand from here?
I ask this question
couple of times,
Wanting your love,
Never knowing
The time had taken you away
And now Where do I stand from here?
Where do we stand from here?

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Larry C
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1 posted 2004-09-12 10:16 AM


Hard questions to answer. I feel your pain. Very well done.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2004-09-12 10:24 AM


sending a hug to you, Vandana.
Sadly, all you can do is take one step at a time, and hopefully soon, the right path for you will become visible. But it sure does hurt to be left standing alone.

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2004-09-12 10:29 AM


vandana
You stand where you always stood within yourself.

Susan
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4 posted 2004-09-12 11:55 AM


The emotions of loss and confusion flow from your words - and this fills my heart with compassion - hugs to you-

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

BluesSerenade
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5 posted 2004-09-12 12:16 PM


I understand this all too well.
We have to stand on our own two feet, and hold our head up,  
and if we stumble and fall, then we've got to dust ourselves off and keep going.

Some days are just harder than others.

Nice writing vandana~

Sunshine
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6 posted 2004-09-12 12:25 PM


Ah, Vandana.  Very poignant write, and your grasp of English is improving!  Congratulations on your 8000th post!
passing shadows
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7 posted 2004-09-12 01:08 PM


just sending hugs

congrats on your 8000-post milestone, sweetpea

Ericc
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8 posted 2004-09-12 04:08 PM


As always...powerfuly expressed!

Eric

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