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pandonov
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b/w conscience and insolence

0 posted 2004-09-11 04:19 AM


response
the one same to my kind
always too late
to recognize.
black eyes smile with alcoholic charm
and i,
lying in sweet dreams
of soft touch
labeled 'mine'.
take your victim
as i did to my own.


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passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-09-11 04:27 AM


damn! Where have you been?
pandonov
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b/w conscience and insolence
2 posted 2004-09-11 04:34 AM


didn't feel like writing
A Romantic Heart
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3 posted 2004-09-11 05:09 AM


I loved this line.."and I, lying in sweet dreams of soft touch that are labeled, mine"....

~love and Hugs
~ARH



Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely!


passing shadows
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4 posted 2004-09-11 05:17 AM


well...you've been missed, for sure
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5 posted 2004-09-11 01:50 PM


Your work is worth waiting for. *S*
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6 posted 2004-09-11 08:58 PM


"didn't feel like writing"

Two things to say about this:

1.  &%#@$&@&!!

2.  Yup, been there...I understand completely.

3.  (which doesn't count because it needn't be said....) I hope you keep feeling like it now.

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