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Common Ground
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Common Ground |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL 
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Common Ground A distance bloodletting time born to decades further than miles could esteem or envision through a dead street mannequin’s vacant gaze at crosswalks paved from love; clotted scabs healing wounds styled over barbed wire barriers to landscaped word verses dewdropped to prism’s reflected pools eyeing the beholder treading lightly the in between of possession Robert |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
you say things in such new ways for me.... like this, a lot. S~ "yet each man kills the thing he loves |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
to prism’s reflected pools eyeing the beholder treading lightly the in between of possession Whoa...this is a complex read and I am tucking it in my library to ponder another time. Very well done Robert! hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Now, Robert, that sounds like common ground which was not so easy to reach! Great write......jo |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Robert...Common ground is many times hard to find...you show that well in this poem. |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
good poetry shouldn't slip so quickly. "yet each man kills the thing he loves |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! sometimes I feel like a mannequin |
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