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Susan
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0 posted 2004-09-06 06:52 AM


Soup’s on!
It’s in the pot
Problem is . . .
What is not-

In it that is.

There’s some spice
Not certain what
Know it’s nice . . .
But I forgot-

To add it.

Think I need
A new direction
A recipe . . .
Of delectation-

Wish I had it.

But as for now
I’ll keep on cookin’
All the time . . .
I’ll keep on lookin’

Until I find it.

s.a.t.

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

© Copyright 2004 s.a.t. - All Rights Reserved
MyHeartofShadows
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1 posted 2004-09-06 06:56 AM


Liked the poem
With soup it doesn’t matter much the spices, if you forget them all you’ll still have hot water for tea.  Cooking can be alright if you don’t worry too much about the details.

ShiningWindHaze
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2 posted 2004-09-06 09:34 AM


That was cute. It's cool to see a humorous side of you.
Enchantress
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3 posted 2004-09-06 09:40 AM


Nice one Susan...you have me smiling here!
Hugs~

~ Summer can't be over...
I still have the sand in my shoes. ~

Susan
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4 posted 2004-09-06 11:49 AM


Ah, if only this were truly about soup

It is a humerous way of looking at oneself when something seems to be missing.

  Susan

btw, I hate to cook

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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5 posted 2004-09-06 01:49 PM


It is a humerous way of looking at oneself when something seems to be missing.
Perhaps....but I don't think much is missing
from your broth....Now,  mine on the other
hand,  (hear the slurp)....tasting it...
You have no idea how much is missing....


Susan
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6 posted 2004-09-06 02:39 PM


Barry, you sweetie- I don't think anything is missing from you're soup either

Hugs you - Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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