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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-09-06 01:11 AM



Interlude


between the space
of black and white
is something
so simply divine
it is the music
of my life
where happiness
shows itself in
the tiniest measures
of the softest
notes of all
an interlude

just some words cut out
from the diary of my heart



© Copyright 2004 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-09-06 01:16 AM


Helen,
Cool...I like the imagery of tihs and it's positive nature too.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

passing shadows
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2 posted 2004-09-06 01:17 AM


very softly done
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3 posted 2004-09-06 01:24 AM


  
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4 posted 2004-09-06 01:51 AM


Soft and beautiful.
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5 posted 2004-09-06 09:42 AM


This is the first thing I read this morning, and I'm glad. The mood of it is exactly my own....I'm in that interlude at this exact minute, and you made sure it's good.

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6 posted 2004-09-06 09:43 AM


that was light on my eyes and sweet. Thanks for the relief. ^_^

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