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0 posted 2004-08-26 02:43 PM




Summers End  

a sun sparkle in your eye
took a trip to the hideaway
star dates ....sky kings and queens
a walk in the woods
a path over a dune
the shore and a beach welcome me
cool thoughts in the sunshine
music in my hands
blending memory's ...feelings of yesterday
pictures break into the heart
times that went to fast
the clouds and rain will pass me along
into the river , of thoughts and dreams and everything


JDWIII

8*26*04

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1 posted 2004-08-26 03:07 PM


smiling, at this lovely write of memories
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2 posted 2004-08-26 03:20 PM



ty

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3 posted 2004-08-26 08:42 PM


yes -

  Susan

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4 posted 2004-08-26 08:48 PM


Sweet!
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I like this so much...


"a path over a dune
the shore and a beach welcome me
cool thoughts in the sunshine
music in my hands
blending memory's ...feelings of yesterday
pictures break into the heart
times that went to fast
the clouds and rain will pass me along "

right to my heart....

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6 posted 2004-08-27 01:40 AM


A Dubya:
You're right, it doesn't really have to end
when we have our thoughts and dreams and everything...
Very nice.
K

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7 posted 2004-08-27 02:43 AM


they go by too fast

sigh

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8 posted 2004-08-28 10:02 AM


sad seeing the summer go , cool replys
lol ....
~w

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9 posted 2004-08-28 01:36 PM


JD~
Reminding us that those Summer memories are written foreverly~

Mirroring some thoughts I had earlier~
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Ya' gotta know I enjoyed this one~
Thank you!
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
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10 posted 2004-08-28 04:42 PM


thanks marge , so glad you enjoyed this also
~jdw

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11 posted 2004-08-28 06:16 PM


Wolf
Yes,it is sad to see the summer go, you have said that sentiment well here..
But strength is shown by those who roll with the punches of the seasons...I think we will all survive....
enjoyed
-------ice
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Come read to me some poem,
Some simple and heartfelt lay,
That shall soothe this restless feeling
And banish the thoughts of day.
Longfellow

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12 posted 2004-08-28 06:51 PM


the clouds and rain will pass me along
into the river , of thoughts and dreams and everything

and this is where they reside until you
touch paths again

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13 posted 2004-08-28 07:01 PM


ice , your right the fall and winter are the best time of the year , well i like them very much , anyways thats the best part of the seasons how they change as we change
thanks ice
inkegoddess,
aww thanks sweets ...your words always make me smile

~wolf-y

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14 posted 2004-08-28 07:25 PM


enjoyed
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15 posted 2004-08-29 01:18 AM


Nice writing, James.......smooth.
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16 posted 2004-08-29 05:06 PM


times that went to fast

Ahuh, this spoke to me .

Nice to see you again Mr Wolf, where ya bin?

Maree

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17 posted 2004-08-29 06:07 PM


and once again, James,
you have read my mind.
(time to get out those cards
for me again . . .)

this is bittersweet

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18 posted 2004-08-29 07:50 PM


vandana ...happy to bring you joy   cool name ....


Iliana....smooth is a great compliment ...
thanks for reading  


Angel , ahh yeah times that went to fast , times that go to fast ...it all passes in a second yet that second can last a lifetime
, or so it seems ... i am right where i have always been m, lol ..see ya around  


little w , did i read it lol , sorry if i did ...and i totaly forgot about those cards ...lol packed in a box somewhere around this place ...which ones where those the medicine cards with the animals ? a cool set those are , they were a friend of mines , let me use them years ago ...someday the favor will be returned ...anyhew good to hear your input ..... peace and all that ,,
~J

howllls

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I was just feeling this today.  The passing is sad, but the river that takes us along is a comfort.  We give ourselves over, and start again.


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20 posted 2004-08-29 11:48 PM


So very beautiful.  Spring has just begun here in Australia and we are looking forward to those long, hot days of Summer.  Thank you for sharing.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
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21 posted 2006-01-14 07:26 PM


thanks for reading and sending such cool replys too thanks much - James

In his mantle gray he walked one day across a shining floor
and with crystal key in secrecy
he opened an ivory door -J.R.R. Tolkien
( the adventure

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22 posted 2007-10-27 05:40 PM


end os summer to the start of fall

nice change of the year i say

ARCTIC WIND

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