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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2004-08-25 05:28 AM






Moon shines bright,
glittering stars blanket the night,
You arrive in the moonlight,

Upon my open window,
you stand,
I gently step out to fly,
I grasp your hand,
Off we go to never never land,

Through puffy clouds we fly,
together you and I,
floating through the
magical, midnight sky,

With you i never grow old,
young at heart, i feel so bold,
youthful love, warm ,tender,
my heart is never cold, it surrenders,

The journeys you take me to,
magical places, full of
wonder and surprise,
I am lost in you,
seeing loves glow deep
in your blue eyes,

Excitement, joy, laughter,
forever inside your world,
of happily ever afters,

There is a kiss,
one I have been saving,
to plant upon your lips,
not to miss,
this...life changing moment,
that time keeps on playing,

I could remain here forever,
inside loves never never land,
my heart never growing old,
loving you forever,

My Peter Pan....

"Yes I will Come and fly away with you and leave my world behind"

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (08-25-2004 06:17 AM).]

© Copyright 2004 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
Goldenrose
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1 posted 2004-08-25 05:40 AM


A fantastic poem...yes i am Peter Pan...my heart is free....this is a well written and wonderful poem of fantasy and your loving heart..thank you..

Goldenrose.xxxxxxxx

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2004-08-25 05:46 AM


Your most welcome ..My Peter pan....where are you taking me to next? what journey awaits us?

Wendy xxxxxx

LeeJ
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3 posted 2004-08-25 07:41 AM


absolutely stunning, brought back many memories for me.  Thank you for writing and sharing
vandana
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4 posted 2004-08-25 09:46 AM


enjoyed
Susan
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walking the surreal
5 posted 2004-08-25 10:50 AM


Lovely- magical - enjoyed.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Gentle Spirit
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6 posted 2004-08-25 10:53 AM


magical....absolutely beautiful!
passing shadows
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displaced
7 posted 2004-08-25 12:59 PM


oh...this is PRECIOUS!
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