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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Falling I wonder if Columbus was right that the world really is round lately I question the logic in it for when I step too close to the edge I keep falling off just some words cut out |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Sweets....we never fall off....we stumble off the curves this old world throws in front of us....one day you're on the top of the world, then the damn thing rotates...I think you've stumbled into something very sweet...think alot of guys have "fallen" for you....or will... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
me too... always an interesting read  M |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
It's just those bumps in the road that make you stumble...take heart the world is round and the day will come when you think you are falling only to fall into arms that will keep you upright... |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
This is really interesting!  But take heart that if you really do fall off again, cling tight to the edge. Then you can slowly pull yourself back up again.  _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
understood  |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wonderful write Helen! Eric |
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