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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon 
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It's brick and mortar thick, impenetrable, something you didn't know. Something I'd never show. Your words fell, dead heavy as lead, before ears could hear, my dear. I've come too far left too many behind oft dealt with your kind and I built the wall impenetrable. You can't go over under, or through, there's no way in not ever for you... so these tears that you see they're not part of me. Just the rain, just the rain. WhiteRose [This message has been edited by WhiteRose (07-08-2004 08:31 PM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, I felt your words to my very core. I too, in the past, had built impenetrable walls to prevent me from crumbling. I was pleased to see your name pop up! I was beginning to worry about you! ~ and perhaps I had good reason... Lending you a shoulder ~ and an ear.  Linda |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Hi Linda  Sometimes life is simply wonderful. Sometimes it's not. Lately, it's not. This poem was written over a month ago. I've only written maybe 4 in the past 6 months or so. My muse left when life got tough. She always was a coward. Anyway, thanks for reading, and for being so kind. Hopefully, and one can never say for sure these days, I will be writing again soon. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Anne, I'm sorry to hear that you are going through some difficult times. They do, however, have a way of making the good times even sweeter. Perhaps you could bring in a muse that is stimulated and inspired by adversity. Your other muse deserves a rest after all the fine writes she has been a party to.  As the saying goes, "The darkest comes before the dawn!" May your dawn be just around the corner! Loving hugs, Linda |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I've built such walls... and also faced them... both situations feel hopeless. *S* It's good to see you posting, my friend! *S* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
understanding this well you know good to see you here again, I've been wondering how you've been |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
WhiteRose Just rain, beautiful write. Enjoyed the read. |
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