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ctowen
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0 posted 2004-08-21 08:00 PM


A warm breeze rising
morning dew
birds making music
a smile from you

springtime air
penny thoughts to share

reckless romancing
fishing holes
footprints in the sand
forever souls

heat trickles
summer's wood nickles

lost tender moments
greying skies
tall baring timbers
fall's crying eyes

endless time
stopping on a dime

a cold wind blowing
drifting dunes
an empty fireplace
and chilling moons

winters last
just a quarter past

counting on the seasons
lost in rhymes
living for reasons

"In life's giving ... love is a gift, such worth living."
  

© Copyright 2004 C. Thomas Owen - All Rights Reserved
iliana
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1 posted 2004-08-21 08:32 PM


I really liked this poem and am happy to place it where I can read it again and again.     

[This message has been edited by iliana (08-23-2004 02:42 AM).]

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2 posted 2004-08-23 04:22 PM


Definitely a reason for celebrating the seasons, really enjoyed this upbeat poem.
passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-08-24 03:04 AM


sometimes I wonder the reasons for living
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Gaia
4 posted 2004-08-24 02:05 PM


hey, Craig.
I always enjoy the seasonal changes, finding them refreshing. Thanks for sharing this one m'friend.

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