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Eromyna
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Pheonix, AZ, USA

0 posted 2004-08-21 07:28 PM



Take your hands away from your eyes
Open them and see
No one's going to hurt you
You're safe, here with me

Maybe you have doubts
Or unpleasant memories
Only, you will soon find out
Resting here is easy
Cause I care far too much to let you be unhappy
Rarely do you find
A match made so perfectly
Feel free to fall with me
To embrace this symmetry

If it's not too much to ask of you
Say you'll do it, please

Take your hands away from your eyes
Or from those fears you can't release
Offer them to me

Soon, you'll know exactly what I mean
When I beg you not to leave
Every moment you are gone
Every solitary heartbeat
Tells me that I'm empty

And it's all that I can do
Not to close my eyes and scream
Don't you ever leave me!

Cause I'm already scared
Understand, it's far too easy
To make this banshee bleed
Even though I know, that you would never do it purposely

"I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation."

© Copyright 2004 Shay D. - All Rights Reserved
iliana
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1 posted 2004-08-21 08:34 PM


A very heartfelt write here.  
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2 posted 2004-08-22 12:17 PM


quote:
Feel free to fall with me
To embrace this symmetry

Oh, but that is beautiful!
Falling together, safely.

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3 posted 2004-08-23 04:20 PM


Well I think Tony is pretty lucky to have such a "soft" safety blanket to fall into Nicely done, hope he sees these.
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