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One Eye Blinks, One Eye Winks
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One Eye Blinks, One Eye Winks |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
One Eye Blinks, One Eye Winks Circled in conundrum, so says winter to summer, I shall fool your days so this month simmers gently, noble August, as remembrance, and thoughts fall even more so, with you in embodiment of memories gone, and to come ~ so special you are. “Go here, to there,” I follow, guided, gliding happy in stance, ready to dance this month so special. Do you recall? Oh! Indeed I do! Touch and sigh then eye to eye one eye blinks one eye winks  This is here, here is there and YouUsI promised though not compromised yet….fact…. Fact cannot, will not, be broken My promise becomes a fading light; You choose to give freedom, yet, I choose your way. I am not one, but I know when angels love as freedom sings. Such rarity, Freedom. Yet, I hear angelic sounds really rising from deep within. One can see Smile ready to rise ~*~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nicely done Soleil...you are shining brightly tonight. Love the picture and how it fits nicely with this poem. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
As spirit speaks to spirit in words well done...Magnificent... |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
so prettily beautifully written! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful! just wonderful! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"One can see Smile ready to rise" ~ Well, m'dear! You can add my name to the list of readers whose smile is rising! A charming and eloquent poem full of spirit and beauty!  Love & Light, EA  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
smile is a name that comes to mind already risen waiting to become a grin kewl stuff inside sole' |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
how beautiful... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 a smile to keep |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"Such rarity, Freedom. Yet, I hear angelic sounds really rising from deep within. One can see Smile ready to rise" Loved this! .......jo |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Soleil! How are you, my friend? Loved this bit of light from you...especially: "I am not one, but I know when angels love as freedom sings." I think you may be...check for wings lately?  |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I am not one, but I know when angels love as freedom sings. So true....picked these lines almost at random from this beautiful piece. Thinking of freedom, and how it can even mean the freedom to choose not to be free, as you put it so beautifully here....though that's a choice that is too seldom made. Freedom too often is seen as the ability to follow a wish or even mere curiosity to any destination, regardless of the devastation that may be left by the choice. It is that, of course, but only if we are willing to accept the consequences of what we yell in crowded theaters. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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