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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 Tourmaline By: Noah Eaton 8/17/04 Fifteen shades of blue kiss the sea, zirconium starships are blinking, cities and villages join together dancing, dolphins leap with butterfly wings singing, electric teal arouses the chinook breeze, rainbows from all ends of the universe backfiring, spilling prisms and ecstasy, our universe is expanding... Tourmaline, tourmaline.  Indicolite fingertips caress emerald forests, electric castles are heaving, kneeboarding on a rubellite punch-drunk abyss, angel fish and lyretails are humming, amethyst ships shipping to sea, sea robins are warbling, love will set our hearts surfing, beautiful planet kaleidoscopic and dazzling Tourmaline, tourmaline.  Our imagination promenades in Coriolis Effect, the Peekskill fireball is blue-shifting, bolide of love explodes upon our pulsating planet, spilling topaz kisses and harmony, Perseid Showers are cascading, we're soused in seventh heaven felicity, spilling prisms and ecstasy, our universe is expanding... Tourmaline, tourmaline, tourmaline, tourmaline... Tourmaline...   "You'll find something that's enough to keep you But if the bright lights don't receive you You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20 |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now why hasn't JM bounced in and all over on this...you know how she is about blue! Spectacular presentation, Noah! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
hiya Noah, where have you been, I've been missing you! This was absolutely stunning...thank you for writing and sharing. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Kari said it best lil buddie, this is SPECTACULAR. Where ya been? Glad your back.   |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
WOW!! Can't say anything close to what I'm thinking about this one Noah. GREAT JOB!! If you're not yourself, then there is no you. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Spectacular! Stunning! Vibrational! Sensational! Glorious! Heavenly! Stupendous! Captivating! Stimulating! Memorable! ~ and a keeper!  Love you, Angel Boy!  EA  |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
I love the way you describe this beautiful area in the northwest  I'm glad that you came so you could put it into words like no one else! Excellent writing...Always, Alyssa Poems are made by fools like me, |
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Pell Member
since 2001-09-16
Posts 134Pacific NW |
Incredible! "My God, It's full of stars" |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Oh, my Angel Love Noah! ! ! Tourmaline says it so well, with all its myriad of gifted color! What an artist you are. I feel the joy in this sweet one! Hugs and thanks for sharing this gift!  ...lily jo |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello, my friend Long time.......no see. Your words were a kaleidoscope of color and the accompanying pictures were absolutely stunning. I hope all is well in your life, Noah. Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hi Noah!!! I'm so glad that I came here tonight and saw this beautiful poem and pictures. I love all these colors!! It is so beautiful!! And, Noah, my sweet friends, I thank you so much for the email that you sent to me. I've been missing you too!!! I hope that you are liking living in the new place!! I'll talk to you later, Sweetie, Hugs, Ethel |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
awesome awesome wow dont know what to say georgous pictures love your stuff |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked this much |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Noah, me thinks you see colors that havent even been named yet.  very very cool write poet sir... as always your vocabulary is impressive and your word play is melodic. I would love to live as a river flows, carried by the surprise of its own unfolding. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
 I had to come back to revisit the colors again...so very lovely Noah, and you already know how much I love this one! |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Wow Noah!! This is indeed a really colourful piece... *LOL* Thanks for sharing it, it showed me a different perspective to poetry. _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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msflame Member
since 2002-05-21
Posts 188 |
Glad I stopped by; this is spellbinding. |
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