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Road Signs |
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Tequilia_Sunrise Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada 
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Road signs always aim to protect. Well, these are what we do reflect. "Dip," that's you, I'm "Curves" in a way, "slippery when wet," well, what else can I say? "Yield" you could never do and "Stop" you always intended to. "Do not enter," I should have said, but our feelings led "One way"--ahead. A "U turn" we should have made long ago, backed it up and taken it "slow," and somehow "Danger" comes to mind. Now I regret not following signs. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Well done and good perspective. |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
definately a new way to look at it...good job Victims....aren't we all. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Thanks for the reminder! I'll pay more attention to the sign posts along the way in my life! Neat poem! Very innovative!  EA |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Good one Amanda. Such wisdom playfully expressed....~P |
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Tequilia_Sunrise Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada |
Thank-you |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
reminds me of one I wrote...I'll find it again later |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
excellent use of the "signs" we are afforded, even if ya saw 'em better on the return trip. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Smart! Well done, TS... |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
pretty cool idea yuh yuh |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
ingenious concept. great job! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very clever and much enjoyed!  ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Enjoyed!!  hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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PKreturns Member
since 2003-07-21
Posts 362New Orleans, LA |
Very well done and clever write. |
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