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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2004-08-16 11:01 PM

That parchment is the script on soul
Words make love to language anew
Melange upon the flower, refined a proper dew

In rhythm awash on emotional waves
Defining the mist of deep concaves
That parchment is the script on soul

And truth lies in the arms of doubt
Token remnants woven all throughout
Each piece reveals the intended grout

Words make love to language anew
Melange upon the flower, refined a proper do
And truth lies in the arms of doubt

Copyright Kkh 8/16/04

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2004-08-16 11:16 PM

"Words make love to language anew
Melange upon the flower, refined a proper do
And truth lies in the arms of doubt"

Kathleen, this is a beautiful glimpse into the soul of a real poetess!

....jo

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-08-17 03:39 AM

beautiful for sure

Kevo
Member

since 2004-06-02

Posts 466
Navarro County, Texas, USA

3 posted 2004-08-17 04:50 AM

I would have to agree. It flows so beautifully. I have captured a small miracle in your collection of words. A profound statement about our collective passion. Well done. I am truly in awe. Another diamond shines.

Big K

~K~
Member

since 2004-07-27

Posts 148

4 posted 2004-08-17 05:57 AM

Awesome write TD! And this line is priceless:

truth lies in the arms of doubt

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

5 posted 2004-08-17 03:53 PM

Beautiful!

Eric

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2004-08-17 09:24 PM

And truth lies in the arms of doubt

such a deep thought from these words.

You are rather good at the ability to give
one the thought to dine upon...as a main
course....or as a tasty dessert.

Well Done K.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2004-08-17 09:33 PM

A most pleasurable read, m'friend.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

8 posted 2004-08-17 09:39 PM

Wonderful write TD !! Enjoyed. hugs, Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."

— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet

Pell
Member

since 2001-09-16

Posts 134
Pacific NW

9 posted 2004-08-17 09:41 PM

And truth lies in the arms of doubt
Token remnants woven all throughout
Each piece reveals the intended grout

Those lines get my gears turning in a whole 'nother direction(and not just 'cause I'm a floorlayer lol). I like everything about this write- what it says, how you express it, and they way it all weaves(is woven?) together. Marvelous.

Been unable to post for a couple days due to a login snafu which rather stalled my reunion with folks here at PiP hehe, I'm so glad I didn't miss this one!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

10 posted 2004-08-17 10:34 PM

both wisdom and beauty coexist within the words

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