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heatre is falling
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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the heatre is falling someone stole the t and left black paint like blood from a crayon some lowe down from down town is moving his money tree into the run down spending juke boxes of city approval tin to cover the spills that made the trees die hired a lady lier with legs and hair and tap dance shoes that match her buttons unbuttoned for the judge ______________ Dark scribnotes..boring really..condemned theatre with a stolen T so a lowes can be built over a oilfield spill site that no one wants to talk about...but the lady lier does look good in her uniform |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
only through your eyes can we see things so vividly D. and this... some lowe down from down town is moving his money tree into the run down way cool dark one... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
hehehhehe, you are a treasure...hiya and good morning, good to see you in there...and yes, all to often, this happens more and more everyday, and I wonder how long it will be until we run out of space... Not boring in the least....something to be concerned about, and you described it brilliantly, as you always do and in a way only you can! Hugs |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
not boring!!! truth, with your signature mind twist... enjoyed K |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark, Well you rang the bell this morning. LOL enjoyed. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Nothing boring about you, your words, or what you see... |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Dark: maybe the lady stole the T gonna name the place lowesT.... K |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
good one, D... For a moment I was trying to figure out that first word. *s M |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
 agreeing with donna only through your eyes! I've tried so hard to tell myself that you're gone though you're still with me |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
thanks for the explaination, it makes the work that much more enjoyable. as always, love the play of your words --  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I do despise top buttons |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS You capture things with your photowords like no other!  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Yep, another stupid coverup. So, what will they do when the nasty stuff oozes up through the pipes? Oh yeah, probably do what all the idiots do and use some really powerful chemicals to try and flush it back down. Out of sight, out of mind? OK, I'll wander off back into my corner and behave. NOT |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
big ol hugs to you all for your eyes here..sorry sy, just hand shake for you guy!! |
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