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A Long Kiss (repost) |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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A Long Kiss A long kiss on the lips with love all around you, like gentle touching blossoms soft and wet, is filled with a nectar to drug and blind you, bringing glowing hypnotic waves from the chest. A long kiss savoured is insanity flavoured; a craving for dreamers to taste the prize for yeilding hearts that send all human reason adrift in circles of love in the mind. A long kiss speaks, but not words you can conquer. A long kiss sings, but not songs you can sing. A long kiss sails on the windsongs of matter caught up in the flight of an alien on wing. A long kiss can torch your heart to continue burning with fire long after it's over a flame left roaring deep within you a molten addiction invading the sober. A long kiss can heal diminished duende a soothing connection for those with a gift. And words can't flatter those few precious moments when visions of true love are more than a wish. Celtrue2000@E3B1G9 Ain't doin nothin at all |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
A long kiss can torch your heart to continue burning with fire long after it's over a flame left roaring deep within you a molten addiction invading the sober. a musical beloved drink, was this painting |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Well, since kissing is my favourite food (next to angel food cake! lol), "a long kiss" is especially delicious! A delightfully pleasing reading experience!   EA |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Yes, there IS healing in a kiss I think ..... and in a long kiss there must be MORE healing still. Beautiful! Love, Margherita  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
sighs and hugs... this is beautiful. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh yes....... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ethome One of your best and a delight to read and sing. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
makes me miss... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Mmmmmm....savoring the images here |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
a flame left roaring deep within you a molten addiction invading the sober. A long kiss can heal diminished duende a soothing connection for those with a gift. ================================ me thinks you should KISS THE GIRL!!!!  Lip locking lines divine E-babes... its soooooooo good to be reading you diminished duende and how cool is that allit!! Way to go rock and roll poet.  |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank yall for the nice comments...Except for Sy and James if I could just get my arms around all you little lovlies I'd lay a long one on yall!! Muuummmm muuummmuumm delicious!! Good for the soul you know......Makes ya wanna shout! Eric Ain't doin nothin at all |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A kiss done well is the most pleasurable sensation a human can experience. I believe... TD |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Much enjoyed this precious write, ethone -- oh, so true.  ....jo |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
pucker up  |
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