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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
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Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2004-08-06 12:21 PM



Swept back in time by
a lone tune from the
past. The way things
were happy,carefree

Fun loving no worries
ahh to be a teenager
again,I wish I knew
what was ahead.

I'd never rush it like
I tried I'd wouldent
want to grow up or
try to get married to
a guy.

Live life as it where
my own for the taking
speak with free sprit
charm pose and demention
of character

The mystery lies ahead
for others as well
pushing to hard and
falling down.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


© Copyright 2004 Julie O'Neill - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2004-08-06 12:35 PM


Live and learn...James
Foxyoasis
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2 posted 2004-08-06 12:38 PM


Yup

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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3 posted 2004-08-06 01:03 AM


So true!   ...jo
passing shadows
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4 posted 2004-08-06 02:34 AM


I agree
ggrn3
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5 posted 2004-08-06 02:44 AM


Foxy

This was excellent.  It made me sit back and reminisce and recollect about my teenage years. If we only knew then what we know now, we wouldn't have been in such a hurry to grow up.  Thanks for a trip down memory lane.

Garfield

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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6 posted 2004-08-06 03:12 AM


Feeling brand new is a wonderful thing, but falling is fact of life,
just like the dust settles, and the rain comes again and washes it away.

Liked this, Foxy~


Foxyoasis
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7 posted 2004-08-06 06:44 AM


thanks guy's

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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