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To Bid Time Return
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To Bid Time Return |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
To Bid Time Return Copyright 2004 by: Mark V Sheldon Sometimes, it pauses… just long enough to remember or relive in slow-motion collage The style may be identical or the color the same and for a moment, you’re there As your heart sinks faster than it beats the score crescendos The melody sustains juxtaposed images and scenes from before Perhaps it was a scent’s striking at your nerve venomously absent Clear of all obstructions a straight line of sight into the jugular of recall A passionate elixir indeed suspending the present with an act of know more To bid time return and play out its course the way your script intended... You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Clear of all obstructions a straight line of sight into the jugular of recall especially liked that part but overall the entire poem was excellent! Adding A clear and present danger...run! Good morning |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
To bid time return and play out its course the way your script intended... ah... more here than meets the casual read... enjoyed my friend... enjoyed |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
"Sometimes, it pauses… just long enough to remember or relive in slow-motion collage" "To bid time return and play out its course the way your script intended..." From start to finish, a captivating connection. Each line delivers the next. Very smooth. Sincerely, Reg |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"Clear of all obstructions a straight line of sight into the jugular of recall" What a line!!! Enjoyed your write, this morning, Mark. .......jo |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
quote:  I'll be keeping this one. Merci, Mark. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Sometimes, it pauses… just long enough to remember or relive in slow-motion collage slow-motion collage -- gotta love that line. The entire piece flows, like sweet memories.  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
forgot to grab this --  S. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Somehow this reminds me of Somewhere In Time.. and of course you know I love this keeper! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I suppose that's why we take pictures |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
*smile*....*click library* |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sometimes, it pauses… just long enough to remember or relive in slow-motion collage ... To bid time return and play out its course the way your script intended... ~*~ Thank you, Mark... |
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