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Snow
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desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2004-08-04 02:37 AM




photo & poem © snow

"Kind words can be short and easy to speak, but their echoes are truly endless."
--Mother Teresa

© Copyright 2004 Snow - All Rights Reserved
iliana
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1 posted 2004-08-04 03:03 AM


Almost spooky, Snow!  Your art is alive!   ....jo
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2 posted 2004-08-04 03:41 AM


read 3 times, got chills


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3 posted 2004-08-04 04:35 AM


damn
JL
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4 posted 2004-08-04 11:47 AM


Very moving!  Enjoyed.

JL


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5 posted 2004-08-04 11:19 PM


This, so succint and yet powerful.

(I LOVE power-writes!)

Awesome combination of media too, made quite the impact!

loved this.

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6 posted 2004-08-05 01:26 AM


Hello Snow. Awesome! This has got to be the most powerful piece I have read in a while. Man I love you work. Tried showing you my latest piece I am working on through e-mail...but something is wrong with my yahoo account. For some reason I can't send e-mails to you. It keeps coming back saying error...unable to deliver. I've been waiting since Sunday for them to fix the problem...but it still is not working. If they don't get it fixed by this weekend I am going to move my account and all saved e-mails somewhere else. Missing you terribly dear. Love - Kevin.

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Susan
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7 posted 2004-08-05 07:34 PM


The media blends to create quite and impact.

Susan

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8 posted 2004-08-05 09:12 PM


Though short...yes...powerfully written with
a mysterious quality to it as well.  Well
done Snow.

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9 posted 2004-08-06 12:45 PM


gave me chills I love it

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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