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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2004-08-04 12:41 PM


If You Would Be My Lover


As two, there's places
we could discover
in the middle of the night
as we held each other tight...
Then I'd loose my grip,
to place soft kisses
on your lips.
In moonglow who knows
how far we could go
once we let go,
or how deep our
love could grow.
So many wonderful places
waiting to be discovered
if I could be her lover.


JamesLee
July17
2004

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1 posted 2004-08-04 04:42 AM


always nice to hear and feel your romantic heart
she'd be crazy not to be your love


JamesMichael
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2 posted 2004-08-05 12:41 PM


Thank you MGROVES for the nice response...James
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