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Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2004-08-02 04:33 PM

How can I ... when the words are caught
within a shudder of overwhelm.  When the memory
of their time so deeply still moves me.  When tears
lie lingering within the corner of hazel eyes.

The beauty of her, so radiant, so pure, yet
so captive to the years that separated her from
her knight....

Her hair, of the era, so soft and delicate, so
desirous of touch....A man would sell his soul
to have just his hand stroke the locks of a
belle so fair...

This dream, becoming a reality.....after years
of what had never been.....I was there,  my tears
stained the pillow where he lay.

Lie me upon the still cool earth that
I might dream and touch a silken face hidden
within the Grandfather’s clock...
awaiting just the right tick of time to come and
awaken within the walls of a room where countless
affairs bloomed and a myriad of stars danced the
ceiling above...as lovers kissed in torrid
abandon...

And, as the end brings to ears my last sigh,
allow my soul to join what once was mine to
cherish......that I might smile upon her face
and weep forever....tears of joy....

For within my pocket lies nothing more than
a hand awaiting her own....and love shall
bloom eternal, somewhere in time.

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2004-08-02 04:52 PM

Lie me upon the still cool earth that
I might dream and touch a silken face hidden
within the Grandfather’s clock...

~*~

This reminds me of my very own favorite movie, Magnus...and I feel as if you have captured my own feelings, as well...

Thank you!

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2004-08-02 05:04 PM

Such a romantic vision, dear Barry!
Beautiful write.
Love, Margherita

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2004-08-02 07:42 PM

Yes..somewhere in time.
My all time favourite movie.
"Is it you?"
Pass the kleenex Barry.
Excellent write.
Hugs~

~ I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before ~

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

4 posted 2004-08-02 08:40 PM

Most beautiful. What heart you have, what soul, your words a reflection of your essence. Thank you for letting me step into a romantic and magical realm . . .

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Broken
Member

since 2000-03-12

Posts 271
The woods

5 posted 2004-08-02 08:49 PM

"This dream, becoming a reality.....after years
of what had never been.....I was there, my tears
stained the pillow where he lay."

Sad piece, especially that verse.

~Broken~

"Base not your joy upon the deeds of others, for what is given can be taken away."

Peter Steele

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

6 posted 2004-08-02 08:51 PM

BJ, now this really was a hankey alert. Somewhere in Time; one of my favorite movies. And now, if I can bear to read this again, snif, snif, I'm saving it to my libary. You lovely man, you.

....jo

Startime55
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since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

7 posted 2004-08-03 11:02 AM

Stunningly romantic...brings flutters to the heart and dreams to the soul...I became wrapped up in the pure beauty of this poem...**hugs** my friend, you never disappoint with your words...

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2004-08-03 12:40 PM

Passion's King of Romance

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

9 posted 2004-08-03 03:23 PM

For within my pocket lies nothing more than
a hand awaiting her own

you are so romantic, Barry...
love reading you
M

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

10 posted 2004-08-03 11:16 PM

Brilliant is the sunshine inked from your mind.
TD

Martie

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

11 posted 2004-08-03 11:21 PM

Barry....such a romantic feeling to this...so very touching!

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

12 posted 2004-08-03 11:25 PM

Hello Barry

I can see that you still have the midas touch. I have really missed reading your wonderful words of love and romance. I hope all is well in your life.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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