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Open Poetry #33

So Sorry

Copperbell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-08

Posts 956

0 posted 2004-08-02 12:27 PM

so sorry
  I didn't mean to...


your words imbed
  prick my heart

I care

I didn't mean
  to do anything
except offer my friendship


still, I wonder
am I friend

  or enemy?

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

1 posted 2004-08-02 01:49 AM

whether a friend or an enemy?  I think a friend.
    At many times in my life, I've wondered the same thing.  Could relate to this well.
Enjoyed.
                miscellanea

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2004-08-02 03:14 AM

I would guess miscellanea is correct in this.

....jo

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-08-02 04:22 AM

Copperbell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-08

Posts 956

4 posted 2004-08-02 11:42 AM

thanks you guys...

Lethe
Junior Member

since 2001-04-10

Posts 36
Blackforrest

5 posted 2004-08-02 08:28 PM

Much enjoyed.

Broken
Member

since 2000-03-12

Posts 271
The woods

6 posted 2004-08-02 08:32 PM

"your words imbed
prick my heart

I care"

The pause before "I care" says alot, it makes the two little words so much stronger.

~Broken~

Copperbell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-08

Posts 956

7 posted 2004-08-02 09:35 PM

Thank you Lethe

Broken, I appreciate your specific comment -

it's embarrasing to care sometimes - aarg

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