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Open Poetry #33

You Don’t Have To Worry

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-08-01 08:52 AM

You Don’t Have To Worry

you don’t have to worry
I won’t love you anymore
besides…
it was just something
my mind made up
in my heart

I can tell it to stop

and go on daily
as I did before
being the champion
of smaller things
surrendering to the hope
of something different

I have readjusted before
to find some reasoning
in other possibilities
instead of…

believing in something
that the world overlooked
and never viewed as
beautiful as it was

unconditionally I have
stood silently by
waiting for my moment
to be recognized

just to feel the sting
of disappointment
for something
I thought so right

so, you don’t have to worry
I won’t love you
anymore

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2004-08-01 08:59 AM

1slick_lady
Good write, good attitude.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2004-08-01 09:42 AM

it was just something
my mind made up
in my heart

~*~

I love your word play...
well done, Helen!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2004-08-01 10:10 AM

Karilea beat me to it, but

it was just something
my mind made up
in my heart

I can tell it to stop

made me smile in recognition~~

hugs
M

James_A_Fraser
Senior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

4 posted 2004-08-01 10:17 AM

You will....as this beautifully written poem says...continue to love.

Those things remain, though they can get to hurt less....eventually....I hope....

~~J

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

5 posted 2004-08-01 10:47 AM

enjoy your read

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

6 posted 2004-08-01 12:38 PM

Sometimes easier said than done. *smile*

Very well said though!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2004-08-01 12:41 PM

the heart and mind don't usually work together...it's the infamous battle...the phrase "like oil and water"

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