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Dark Enchantress
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since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258
meet Morgana

0 posted 1999-12-05 05:15 PM


With the loss of the day,
the people have all gone home
The snack bar is closed
and no more confusion can be heard
All but the ocean is still
as I make my way across the silent terrain
With the slow setting of the sun
the sand is cool and soft beneth my feet
Scattered trash left behind
is the only sign that just hours ago,
this lonely paradise was full of life
The chilled wind blowing softly
with such sweet harmony,
it sweeps away my blanket
leaving me delicate and bare,
as I draw nearer to the murky depths of my sanctuary
But not too far my friend,
for I know not of what awaits me there
'Tis an untrusting soul,
even in the serenity of my empty body
And as the darkness grows stronger,
I must pull away
Keep my bed safe for me,
so that I may return to it another day

© Copyright 1999 Morgana - All Rights Reserved
Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 1999-12-05 06:08 PM


This was simply beautiful DE  

 The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


Dark Enchantress
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since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258
meet Morgana
2 posted 1999-12-06 05:07 AM


Well it better be! Dagnabit, it took me all day to write. What can I say? I had an itch. Eh..to write that is. Thank you Isis. =)
Sven
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since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA
3 posted 1999-12-07 09:19 AM


I must agree with Isis. . . you do have the gift my friend. . . thank you for sharing it with us. . .

 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl



JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
4 posted 1999-12-07 02:26 PM


I must say dag nabit...
It was a day well spent.

Liked very much  


Jenny Lee


 Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.


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