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armanca
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0 posted 1999-12-05 08:29 AM


Lidocaine Sine qua non

A condescending solique
make icicles dance like tactiles
Berated inner wing...
Domesticated until she can't fly alone
Mutated robot with fragile wires
Exposed sanctum, eternal niche
The only means of sanity freshly bruised


Carman


[This message has been edited by armanca (edited 12-08-1999).]

© Copyright 1999 Carman - All Rights Reserved
Isis
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since 1999-09-06
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1 posted 1999-12-05 06:10 PM


I know her well, great job  

 The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


armanca
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since 1999-07-07
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2 posted 1999-12-08 09:50 AM


Thank you Isis...I also wanted to thank you for always giving me a reply.  

Carman

Sven
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3 posted 1999-12-08 12:35 PM


May she one day fly on her own. . .

 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl



armanca
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 211
Tennessee
4 posted 1999-12-08 01:53 PM


She's getting there Sven...Baby steps



Michael
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5 posted 1999-12-09 03:03 PM


I really loved this piece.  Great last line.

Michael

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