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Walter Poe
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 787


0 posted 1999-12-03 05:49 AM


Crystal tears
Raining down
From up high
The clouds around

From lady
From love
In her tears
I drown

Crystal tears
Splitting light
rainbow maker
love Delight

Crystal tears
Goddess eyes
Shatter ours
Shatter Mine

Crystal tears
A Crystal shroud
Keeps me going
As I stand proud

Crystal Tears
Fill my pool
Made of gold
Pity me fool all told

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Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace,
of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd

© Copyright 1999 Paul Weatherstone - All Rights Reserved
Jaguar
Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 51
Quezon City, Philippines
1 posted 1999-12-03 05:54 AM


Simply astounding!
beautiful poetry friend.

danni
Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688
wisconsin
2 posted 1999-12-03 10:29 AM


Beautifully done. I think this one has just become a favorite.
sweetcollege_girl
Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872
just about where I want to be
3 posted 1999-12-03 01:04 PM


one word.....WOW
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
4 posted 1999-12-03 06:12 PM


Simply beautiful, a jewel for anyone who reads it

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The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850
In the space between moments
5 posted 1999-12-05 12:06 PM


Wow....this truly is indeed a jewel. Wonderful!

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*Krista Knutson*

"When you start falling, who's gonna catch ya? I'm willing to betcha, it will be me." ~Faith Hill: It will be me~


poetFemmeFatale
Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646
Arkansas
6 posted 1999-12-05 12:55 PM


Ooohh - I liked the title so MUCH!! Had to read it, and was not disappointed at all! Great poem sir!

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- - - If I can just touch you once, then I feel I have accomplished what I am called to do...- - pFF


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