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Neala
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since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA

0 posted 1999-12-02 06:35 PM


The mystery of uncertainity
The hope of the hopeless
The pain of the hurt
This is my life
These are my emostions
This is all I feel

[This message has been edited by Isis (edited 12-03-1999).]

© Copyright 1999 Rachel Parrish - All Rights Reserved
danni
Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688
wisconsin
1 posted 1999-12-02 07:03 PM


Short but effective. I to have felt these things.
starboards
Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida
3 posted 1999-12-02 09:51 PM


"The pain of the hurt" I like this line...please keep writin, i love reading your poetry

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"If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was"

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
4 posted 1999-12-03 12:15 PM


Did you jump in my soul this morning without knocking?? I too sometimes feel this way. Well done

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The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



eegood
Junior Member
since 1999-11-16
Posts 41
Chicago,IL
5 posted 1999-12-03 02:12 AM


I must jump on board....great work
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