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One More Rose
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One More Rose |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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Another rose from you. A gesture of your love. Or so you say. A rose to remind me of you While you're away. It's beautiful as always You seem to find the best, Long-stemmed and red. But will it keep me warm Alone in my bed? Don't misunderstand me I love roses from you And I have from the start But this time, I wish that instead of one more rose, You had given me your heart. ------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 11-29-1999).] |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Love in longing. Nice. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
The longing, one of life's greater pains. Beautifully done Sven!  ------------------ The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
I can feel your longing for more. Well done. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Longing and roses...I know them well. Enjoyed very much Jennifer ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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captaincargo Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 109Corning, N.Y. U.S.A. |
Compelling, I could feel the yearning with underlying tones of resentment. very well done. ------------------ Cap. Carg. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
"You can tell me you love me a thousand times, but I'd feel it more in just one touch." Very well said, Sven, I truly can relate to this one. Michael |
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Deverone Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 136San Antonio, Tx, USA |
Very beautiful poem...I really enjoyed reading... "Thirsting for a Love's touch can strain one's heart much To be with them in your eye you would feel ever so high So take with you my rose this I hope you will know within it lies my precious Love for you are my purest Dove." Looking forward to seeing more from you. ------------------ Deverone "We are cups, constantly and quietly being filled. The trick is, knowing how to tip ourselves over and let the beautiful stuff out". ----Ray Bradbury--- |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all so much. . . your words mean a lot. . . Sven ------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Jaguar Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 51Quezon City, Philippines |
Beatifully written magically woven what power of yours that made me open my doors. @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@ This is a really good one Sven, you really nailed me this time. It's now your turn to bring back a fond memory of mine. @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@ Black Beads is all that I have of you that I would hold on to for if you are with me together we'll spend eternity. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you Jaguar. . . It would seem that you and I have much in common. . . 'Tis no power my friend That made me open your doors But do walk through, and in the end You will find that love will be yours. . . Sven ------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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