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suicidal dreams Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343Toledo Ohio USA |
I was born so abnormaly Brought through the stomach, and so lifeless. Brought to the living world, dead. Brought here so abnormaly. Maybe this is why death facinates, Maybe this is why I want death. Maybe this is why im so abnormal P.S. Kristi if you read this dont worry im fine LOVE YA! ------------------ life is short kill quick |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Maybe, but I don't think so.  ------------------ The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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pixon Junior Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 10oh. |
That was srewed up to talk about suicide then say your fine. But I like most of it. HOw can you go from suicide to I love ya!? Truly I would like to know it could come in handy.Pixon |
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suicidal dreams Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343Toledo Ohio USA |
Wasnt talking about suicide chelsie. I was talking how I was born dead (it dont bother me to talk about it) but when it said maybe this is why I want death it doesnt mean death for me but death for others. ------------------ life is short kill quick |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Nothing abnormal at all about you Tom. Good little piece here Jenny Lee ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Some percieve life as a gift, then some seem to have it forced upon them...I wonder which it really is? Michael |
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Deverone Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 136San Antonio, Tx, USA |
Enjoyed reading SUICIDAL......but as usual makes me think .....very good though. Kinda agree with Michael though....no offence ------------------ Deverone "We are cups, constantly and quietly being filled. The trick is, knowing how to tip ourselves over and let the beautiful stuff out". ----Ray Bradbury--- |
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suicidal dreams Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343Toledo Ohio USA |
Deverone no offense taken I understand what was ment and you know this poem spawned a sort of graphic drawing of my birth but thats another story.... life is short kill quick |
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