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Walter Poe
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787


0 posted 1999-11-26 11:40 AM


I am lost
I live inside
It is dark here
the dreams left me
I long to dream
I created this place
No life here
Even my dreams have died
Lost on a pedestal
No emotion
No trust
Only snakes on their bellies
slither in the dust
I am alone here
without any
with only
all I have forgotten
take me home
I long to exist again
I long to dream again
Take me home

All alone
In the darkness
Am I

All cold
And unfeeling
Bereft of warmth
Of humanity
I once shunned
Take me back
to dreams
of warm places
of warm people
Take me back

Im so cold

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Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace,
of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd

© Copyright 1999 Paul Weatherstone - All Rights Reserved
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 1999-11-26 05:27 PM


The lonliness you portrayed touches the soul Walter, Bravo

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The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



Neala
Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA
2 posted 1999-11-28 01:43 PM


Hey,
That is really cool. Very easy to relate to in life. Keep dreamin!
-Neala

lostboy
Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275
New Hampshire, USA
3 posted 1999-11-28 02:23 PM


Long live dreams and dreamers. Very good work Walter.
FreeByrd
Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 267

4 posted 1999-11-28 02:58 PM


Nice work Dreamer...
I like this piece very much.
-RS


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Michael
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
5 posted 1999-11-29 04:20 AM


I have shared such a coldness, Walter, well done.

michael

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