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mojar Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 169granbury, texas, usa |
tears of joy, tears of sorrow, will tears be left enough for tomorrow. tears that leave indelible stains, these tears of happiness, these tears of pain. tears are as many as the stars in the sky, tears enough to make rivers run wide. tears that fill the eyes of a child, the innocense found, so meek and mild. tears of love, tears of fear, tears that fall, that you can hear. tears that cleanse, the soul to shower, hold within them an incredible power. me. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
I adore the last two lines......... I benefit so from cleansing tears. Much rather experience that emotion;than having the intense emotions that come from other forms of crying. Loved all the emotions in this  Jenny ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Wisdom and beauty. I too enjoy a good cry or soul cleansing ------------------ The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Tears, oh very nice, mojar. Liked this poem a lot. |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
Yes, very well done. It's been a while since I've experienced the soul cleansing kind. The sorrowfull and pained ones are have been in abundance, not leaving much room for anything else. |
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