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For_Never
Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 125
Cincinnati, oh, United States of America

0 posted 1999-11-24 08:27 PM


What is this thing we all want..
why do we need this so bad..
for a fleeting moment..lost within ourselves.
we know...

I know how the darkness belies,
the innocence inside, of rotting thoughts..
and shadowed pools on empty plains..
like a mind adrift at nothing..
one who cares has ends with nothing...
so much as he whom does not fret...
at the simple lies..
this life gives us hope of naught..
and ever onward do we plot...
conjecture fill with illusions breathe..
yet in the end..


we all kiss... Death..

Edward A. Beerman
11-24-99

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For a fateful night of passion, since my heart need one last vent, I believe I am willing to pay that black widows rent...

© Copyright 1999 Edward A. Beerman - All Rights Reserved
Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
1 posted 1999-11-24 08:33 PM


Ouch...poignant and so very true, Ed. Wonderful work.

Michael

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 1999-11-24 11:39 PM


Very true For Never, but it matters too what we do before we embrace death!!
Loved this btw...

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The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
3 posted 1999-11-25 11:19 AM


The innocence inside, of rotting thoughts...

Great depiction here F...of desolate emotions.

Jenny

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