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Rage |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin 
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It's happened again, it rushes in I feel it coming on such a simple, little thing for some reason seems so wrong It hits me hard, I start to shake my insides set aflame no, not now, just go away I feel such lowly shame I rage so much, I feel as though I could kill someone I clench my fists, and try to stop I'm like a loaded gun I need to be alone right now so I'll excuse myself please dont worry, or be upset just tending to my health It "set me off", something so small you'd never understand you want to know, but I cant tell in a while I'll hold your hand I'm sorry for this, but I cant say what put this "evil" in me It's such a "nothing" little thing that even I cant see I cannot hurt you, I cannot try I dont want you to know so let me leave for just a bit my thanks will surely show. ------------------ Life is what you make of it... Not what you let it be |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Such powerful emotions! But rage well handled I see. Liked this a lot T.K  ------------------ The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Your emotions in this piece are made loudly. I am like a loaded gun...is that not power or what? Well Done Jenny ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Indeed, Rage seems to be an entity of it's own, doesn't it. Great piece. michael |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Thank you all very much... Still cant say why or how this happens, just know that every once in a great while it "sneaks" up on me. Thank you again ------------------ Life is what you make of it... Not what you let it be |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Yes, it seems that rage can sneak up on you and you don't even know what trigers it. Such little things can make a person angry. It's being human I guess. |
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