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mojar
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since 1999-11-09
Posts 169
granbury, texas, usa

0 posted 1999-11-19 01:11 PM


toys and memories from the past,
keeps us young at heart.
how sweet it would be,
from that life to never, ever part.

having no worries or stress to fear,
that would be just dandy.
oh, how i cry to be young again,
and eat lots and lots of candy.

to get up early, or sleep in late,
the decision would be mine.
to have no job and still get money,
that would be just fine.

to fall in love once a week,
with a little blonde haired girl.
with eyes of blue, that sparkle and shine,
amidst those golden curls.

life was oh so simple then,
why do we have to age.
we should start out old, then turn young,
go backwards page by page.

me.

© Copyright 1999 mojar - All Rights Reserved
JennyLee
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since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
1 posted 1999-11-19 02:12 PM


Giggles...there's those blue eyes again.
This is lovely


Jenny Lee

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.


Deep Blue Me
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since 1999-11-04
Posts 396
By a big lake
2 posted 1999-11-22 04:26 PM


Nostalgic, Mo.

Good, good , good.

DB

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
3 posted 2000-01-18 12:31 PM


This was very sweet....I do to have many good memories of childhood!!  But, there are many people who had very dark memories of being children and I wouldn't wish them to return there at all!!  Nicely done!!

Take Care
Bridgette

danni
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since 1999-11-20
Posts 688
wisconsin
4 posted 2000-01-18 01:53 AM


Hmmmmm....mo, that would be nice!  
I enjoyed this piece very much!

Bojopy
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since 2000-01-03
Posts 391

5 posted 2000-01-19 12:17 PM


Oh those innocence thougts of the young so beautiful!  I wish I could go back to those again.  I do wish we wouldent taint are young with thoughts of racism and all those terrible traits adults have!!!!

 

"Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy)



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