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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

0 posted 1999-11-18 06:21 AM



The soul it cried out to be understood,
But no one heard,
And would it have made any difference,
If they could?

I can't help but wonder,
As I've said before,
Can one truly know and understand another?
Or only glance in the door?

Spirit waning,
Spirit baying,
Spirit dying,
Spirit what are you saying?

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


© Copyright 1999 Isis - All Rights Reserved
Lolita
Junior Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 44
Buffalo, NY, America
1 posted 1999-11-18 06:42 AM


Literally bursting with fruit flavour Isis, my darling
Deep Blue Me
Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396
By a big lake
2 posted 1999-11-18 09:37 AM


Spirit soaring through your work.

DB

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And if the band you're in starts playin' different tunes,
I'll see you on the dark side of the moon.
==P. Floyd==

Lolita
Junior Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 44
Buffalo, NY, America
3 posted 1999-11-18 11:15 AM




the paper holds their folded faces to the floor
and everyday the paperboy brings more

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
4 posted 1999-11-18 05:14 PM


Lolita, I like the workings of your mind
Thanks DB, it's one way to soar!!

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
5 posted 1999-11-19 02:38 AM


Spirit is crying out, indeed, Isis. Well done.

Love the Pink Floyd quote, too, Lolita...

Michael

JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
6 posted 1999-11-19 02:49 PM


Beautiful Warrior Princess.
Verse one says it all


Jenny Lee

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.


Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
7 posted 1999-11-19 05:08 PM


Thanks Michael, and thanks Jenny Lee

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


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